Revised Storyboard Thumbnails

I am currently working on including some changes based on feedback from the first cut animatic. I am still working with how ambiguous of a metaphor I want the dying fish to be, but one thing that I definitely felt was needed in the film, others agreed, was to show the staircase leading to the end aquarium earlier in the film in its "normal" state. I wanted this so that when the protagonist chases the fish to the base of the stairs the change in environment will have some context.

 Open with staircase.

 Zoom/tilt to show city street at top of stairs with raised train track in background.
- cut -

 Low angle shot of pedestrians passing with traffic humming on the street behind.

 Tilt upwards and begin camera twist to Dutch angle.

 Continue tilt and twist.

End in upshot of train passing through frame.
- cut to protagonist sitting on train -

Lastly I wanted the approach to the viewing wall to be flatter and for the protagonist to be even more dwarfed. This is the new layout I will update in the animatic.

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Animatic Update

Just completed the first rough cut animatic in the Storyboards section. I'll be showing it around school asking people what they think about timing and such. I've been staring at it for a bit and I feel some cuts are a rapid while others feel long. I need to find that magic balance.

Welcome!

Hello and welcome to my newest blog! I will be posting work as I create it so please check back regularly. So far I have been working on this project for just over a month and I'm excited at how far it has already come. Below are the first thumbnails I sketched up early one morning.

More of a brain dump but it got the ball rolling. On that note head on over to Storyboards after visiting the Story section to check out the newly completed boards.